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We Rich in our Color by ~jovegathering:iconjovegathering:



Afterwords

recluse the harlotry, eyeball you
long faces hidden in holism, to them unbeknownst
to noses normalized,
of their breathe still lingers
foggy windows, fading slowly

stepping inside
waiting in the common room
their long faces, peering out the windows,
lifted my heels over each crack of the sidewalk
as they memorized hexagons of my figure
through a slideshotting chainning link fence

bordering their yard
these are territorial
I walk to the porch, i dont have to knock
the floors, theyre moving
theyll take you where you need to go
in browsing doors with pictures
a dog with a broken leg
he limps past me, brushes my leg
its the television phazes smacking away
at the brain of engrain color-
a healing leg is shaking the drench away

the closing times lingering about in the drapes
FLIP UPON THE WORLD ONTO THE COATS OF RAINY DAYS!
Rain on clouds shall we.
the soil stirring fell from the yard of hexagons
rinsing amongst the iris of the world, we rich in our color
a droplet for the eyeball, a cleanse of the ocean

tilt back of the head
and sit upon a silverlit evening
the crystals of grass backlighting the moon
the cross of our body softly stretching
in a tightly knit knotting
resting in the neck and properly placed,
for the star of my voice to float above the universe
engraving our signature upon the scroll

we are speaking back to you beloved.
©2005-2009 ~jovegathering
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Author's Comments

describing the prostitutes of the mind as having our thoughts being trapped inside a house. The negativity of life is a thin layer of gray to give support to the field of color we project into the universe. When colorless thought occurs it is the bands of our color resting and taking breath- down into the pit of government, so it may rejoice and bounce freedom to our lights, and shine the prism of our colors, adding to the painting of unity; describing this field of the eye. The first and last lines are to provide a return for the reader, as there is always a return of rest and the time for breath to occur. Afterwords is misspelled to encourage freedom, because when negative thoughts do arrive, you have already started to leave them and are blending into the color of light again.

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:iconengel08:
Nice very well put together. I like the images of the hexagons it gives almost a futuristic feel of it a unknown layer of the world beneath ours and it takes a drop to the eye to cure ourselves from the disturbing rooms of these places.

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:icondariannox:
As always I love your phrases, line by line you have a way of putting this that creates pictures in a person's head. My only crit is that still as a whole you are not always clear. Try to bring your view into focus so that you have little need of a preface... let the story tell itself.

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